Well im not rly into this type of genre...
The thing that gets MY attention is that your score is still a V5...no fair(=C). I'll make it even V'er by Keep it a V5! Now lets get to the review. Well i can't really grade you on originality cause...im not used to listening to this genre of music. Effort I give every one tens cause i know they work hard on there audio...not all of them but most. Diversity it's ok but not very different. Clarity was ok...you rly could of spiced this up though! If you would of added an ambient background like "clocks" ambient background. This would of been alot better. Whatever though...
Keep it \V/ girl!
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