Its a little dry...=\
The song really needs something to make it flow! The atmosphere is a little dry! The piano is ok, but a little to loud! it really needs something to lead it...like a leading synth! Its ok dude, but definitely not your best! You can do better! =D
Keep it Viewtiful!
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-m->M\m/M<-m-